Wang Dong Cheng as Wang Zhi Kai
Wu Zun as Zhang Tang Jun
Yan Yalun as Li Yen Yu
Chen Yiru as Xue Chen Qu
Xiu(DCW) as Ye Quan
Wang Zi as Lin Zhi Yen
as for the four main female leads you can dream it as being yourself and your friends!
Ren Qiao Ping- oldest sister, loves looking nice, keeps everyone up to date in order and a great communicator
Ren Mei Jin- second sister, she manages everything her older sister can't she's the book worm and chef
Ren Ye Lin- third sister, she's the weird one, a klutz yet she's great at sports she is stubborn but is great at making coffee drinks or smoothies
Ren Tian Ya- the last sister she is sweet as a cookie, she is great at baking the cute little princess everyone loves but she is as stubborn as her older sister Ye Lin!
I started on this one about a year ago not finished yet but I want to see what others think before I go any further I will finish it because there are ppl who read these regardless but I want to know what you all think!
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I Want to Order LOVE-我想點愛情 By:XM
...beginning clip---Check out the new store!!!
QiaoPing:eh?Mei Jin why has business been slower lately.(looking outside)
Mei Jin:Why else? that new cafe down the street.
YeLin:what's so good about their place?
<door open>
QiaoPing:Welcome,oh...Tian Ya your late.
MeiJIn:should I deduct her pay.
TianYa:If you do I'll wont to show you guys the jusicy gossip I got!
QiaoPing:Listening...
YeLin:Stop Your Nonsense.
TianYa:dont wanna listen..fine.
MeiJin:Wait...tell me.
Tian Ya:look I took pictures of the 4 guys that work there...(camera)...Re Nao CAFE!
QiaoPing:He plays the guitar....so cute..
TianYa:oh...that's Wang Zhi Kai. He does what you do, welcoming, host...chatting yada yada.
MeiJin:Who;s this?
TianYa:that one is thier chef.Zhang Tang Jun. his looks and pastas are both inferior!
QiaoPing:Oh...coffee...YeLin this one?
YeLin:Not interested(making coffee)
TianYa:oh!thats him...their charmer, his eyes and coffee charm all of the lady customers.
YeLin:oh...eh! Is his name Li Yen Yu?
TianYa:how'd you know? you have been...
YeLin:Not! He's in my Judo class, he's the new president!
MeiJin:Judo?..hey Tian Ya he..
TianYa:Yes Mr.Sunshine! Xue Chen Qu!
All smiles, sweet and smart! He makes the sweets.
Qiao Ping:like you?
TianYa:yes.
(door opens---ring)
QiaoPing:wel...
Wang Zhi Kai:Hi!
(starring....)
<theme song plays>
....chapt.1-NewCafe....
Wang Zhi Kai :eh?...why dont you go in first?
YenYu :you dragged us down her to argue who's going in first.
(looking at eachother)---push
zhi kai:oh...HI!
QiaoPing:eh?welc....oh. TianYa?
MeiJin:(pointing)behind the counter.
Chen Qu:Not too bad no wonder they have such good business
Qp:whats that suppose to mean...you two stop.
YeLin:Tian Ya your in my space move! dont touch the coffee beans Tian Ya! No!
ZhiKai:(elbow)YenYu she sounds like you...
YenYu:YeLin?...
Zhi Kai:you know her.
YenYu:mmhmm...she's in my Judo class, Vice President.
Zhi Kai:can she take a hit.
YenYu:better than most girls.
QiaoPing:coming here as customers or..
TangJun:yea why else right...uncle can keep the place going for a while.
QiaoPing:oh...have a seat anywhere.
ChenQu:By the way I was referring to you guys.
ZhiKai:here we go...try an easier target.
YenYu:who makes your coffee?
QiaoPing:Oh?my younger sister, YeLin.
ZhiKai:you guys are sisters!!!
ChenQu:Oh...we forgot to tell you huh...ok...
the 1st daughter-QiaoPing-loves shopping, reading and is a talented bargainer...her sweet tongue gains this cafe many customers.
the 2nd daughter-MeiJin-loves making dishes for others and she makes the best rice omellet in town. jeez Zhi Kai your slow.
ZhiKai:so that means she's...
Tang Jun:the youngest. uhhh...
ChenQu:Tian Ya. right?
Tianya:Yeah!
ChenQu:Tian Ya...she is talented in making sweets like to eat them as well, she also brings a lot of customers here because of her cute character.
Tianya:wah...he knows so much.
ZhiKai:nah...what about her!(points to ye lin)
ChenQu:Likes Judo....uhhh...hold on, her talent is making stuff like coffee shakes...
(setting down coffee)
QiaoPing:wrong!
ZhiKai:wrong?how...chenqu really understands girls.
MeiJin:but Ye Lin out of the 4 of us is the weirdest and doesnt think like a regular girl usually does.
ChenQu:oh thats why....then she...
MeiJin:dont be surprised my sister has always been really abnormal....most people even us dont know what she's thinking.
QiaoPing:Well right now...she wants you to be quiet and get in the kitchen and make the crepe.
Mei Jin:you got the cold chill didnt you...
TangJun:I thought that was the a/c.
Qiao Ping:Its never this strong unless you oh no....Tian Ya!
TianYa:yes....*guilty*
QiaoPing:what did you do?
Tian Ya:I....accidently dropped two bean bags and mixed the beans...
MeiJin:What!....YeLin will ignore us for at least a week now.
Yen Yu:that bad...its not that hard to differate between the two is it.
MeiJin:it is for us...well the 3 of us...Why did you say its not hard.
TangJun:eh...YenYu's eyes are pretty good, telling beans apart is his skills anyway.
ZhiKai:you say it like thats all he knows.
ChenQu:other than scaring away your admirers,it just about is.
TangJun:I think he stole 3.
ZhiKai:cant be that bad.
QiaoPing:oh, then you wanna see if you can enter her area without her ripping your head off.
YenYu:you say it like your sisters a...
QiaoPing:weirdo
MeiJin:freak
TianYa:obsesses with drinks...
YenYu:eh?so many...I was gonna say alien.
(in Ye Lin's corner)
ZhiKai:you really are that weird.
Ye Lin:Whats it got to do with you, get away from my area
ZhiKai:wow..scary.(sarcastic)
YeLin:I wasnt kidding,you wanna see a ghost I can help you...back up theres a bean under your elbow dont crush it.
zhikai:oh.
YenYu:your taking to long to seperate things.
YeLin:What do you mean...I...Senior..stop being a busybody wasnt yesterday enough for you.
YenYu:Are you still angry you arent club president? Sorry but you know there is an easier way, just do this, pick up those that are lighter that way you dont have to smell each one.
YeLin:Who knew someone who only cares about he appears knows crap about My coffee beans!
YenYu:This is when you say Guys arent all hopeless.
YeLin:Well then there's no help there now is there.
YenYu:(Smile Crooked)Oh.Then your on your own too.
YeLin:its fine I know what I'm doing.
YenYu:Sure judging from your skill I'm pretty sure you havent even been educated in how to mix vanilla cream and coffee.
YeLin:Who said I havent been taught well,eh?! My dad sent me all the way to Hong Kong!
YenYu:oh...Zhi Kai I'm off first.(Leaves)
ZhiKai:sorry, YenYu is like that.
YeLin:2sided pighead.
QiaoPing:Just a question Zhi Kai,right? Why did you choose this street to do your business.
ZhiKai:Ever since we were small each on of us wanted to do something by ourself in an area where our parents had no control over us...so we opened the shop just happen to be down a litte way.
MeiJin:makes sense.
ChenQu:okay see ya girls we gotta go back to work now.
TianYa;just out of curiousity, I wanted to know where you guys go to school? or are you no longer studying?...
ChenQu:Taipei's National Uni., Filming Department.
TangJun:I'm the new Basketball Captain, but I'm in the Culinary Department.
ZhiKai:I'm in the music department also on the swimming team and Yen Yu is in..uhh....
YeLin:Management department and is in Judo.
TianYa:Wah! you even know this and your not even close with them!
ChenQu:actually Ye Lin long time no see....I notice you the first moment I walked in the door.
YeLin:Senior Xue you know playing you dont know me, is quite over the top.
(beginning of schoolyear)
Xue Chen Qu is walking around looking for class with Zhang Tang Jun...
ChenQu:hey tang jun where the heck is this class?
TangJun:your asking me?
Yelin is walking reading a book....bumps into chenqu and drops her book.
ChenQu:oh! sorry sorry.
Yelin:jeez...dont you have eyes.
TangJun:Am I mistaken Miss it was you that wasnt looking...
Yelin:You two are definetly 2 out of the 4 new students that transferred here, still have the guts to keep talking so arrogantly to me.
(girls screaming...)
ChenQu:miss sorry but....this classs.
YeLin:Westwing...that way go quickly.
The two run off,YeLin keeps walking....
TangJun:Thanks!Eh! What's your name!
YeLin:YELIN!!! RenYeLin!
ChenQu:She's kinda cute.
TangJun:quickly!
run off...
(Ending Theme Song playing....)
.....Chapt.2-First Day of School.....
TianYa:Hurry QiaoPing we're gonna miss the bus!!!
QiaoPing:Go first!I'll catch up..
TianYa:Okay bye bye mimi.(kisses dog on cheek)
Uncle Chung:TianYa wat about me.
TianYa:bye bye...uncle.(hug)
---outside---
TianYa runs to the bus stop....then she spots Yen Yu and Tang Jun.
TianYa:Hello!
TangJun:Hi.
YenYu nods.
TianYa:you guys ride the bus?
YenYu:Can we not?
TianYa:I didnt mean like that I just meant well...
TianJun:He knows Yen Yu's just messing w/ you....you think we all have those big nice fancy convertible cars?....laughing...
ChenQu pulls up in a yellow convertable.
ChenQu:speak for yourself.(smile)Actually we all do its just these two like public transportation.Wanna ride?
TianYa:Me?! Really?
YeLin:TianYa! You woke up so early just to get a ride from Chen Qu....
MeiJin:Senior Xue thanks but my little sister should best ride with us.
TianYa:Awe...
ChenQu:I can fit 3.
TianYa:how about just 2,YeLin is a mood spoiler MeiJin is nicer....
TianYa pushes Meijin into the backseat and sits in the front..
TianYa:bye bye.
YenYu:See ya loser.
ChenQu:You mean winner! eh? I got a cute one and a shy one, you zip.
YeLin:Mei Jin you have to stop spoiling her...ma wouldnt want you to do that....
TianYa:how would you know what mama wanted for me!
Hurt goes across yelin's face.
Yelin:How wouldnt I know.
MeiJin:Senior let's go.
ChenQu:Oh...okay see ya.
TangJun:Eh?I never asked where is your mom?
YenYu:Shut up.
YenLin:No its fine,she passed away when I was 7.
(bus arrives)
all three get on
(...back at shop...)
QiaoPing running:dang I'm gonna be late.
motorcycle sounds.
ZhiKai:QiaoPing need a lift?you wont make the bus.
QiaoPing:oh...is that okay.
ZhiKai:unless your a pretty girl who wont mess up her hair its okay
QiaoPing:eh!
ZhiKai:Kidding, I'll give you a lift.
(gets on)
QiaoPing:In a while when we're at the corner just drop me off.
ZhiKai:Why dont wanna be seen with me?
QiaoPing:No!Just...Just...
ZhiKai:Just what....your sisters...your old man?
QiaoPing:All of it isnt right, my fans will kill you then your new fanclub wont let me go and YeLin will try to interfere and get in trouble.
ZhiKai:Why is it YeLin?
QiaoPing:You got yourself a lot of question.
ZhiKai:simple question only,no offence.
QiaoPing:oh....no just I dont want YeLin in any more trouble.
ZhiKai:oh so she's a troublemaker then....I thought she was just on the basketball and Judo team for no reason.(laugh)
-redlight-
QiaoPing slips up a little.
QiaoPing:Whoa...
ZhiKai catches her.
ZhiKai:Hold on tightly jeez you know I dont bite.(laught=)
QiaoPing:oh...okay...(tightens grip)
ZhiKai:eh?your the oldest right?
QiaoPing:yea...
ZhiKai:Okay then I'll call you the Old Lady!(laugh)
QiaoPing:Eh! I'm pretty sure your older okay!
ZhiKai:Really?I was born in August.
QiaoPing:So am I.
ZhiKai:Really what day?
QiaoPing:20th.
ZhiKai:August 20th really....(laughs)Your older!
QiaoPing:What day are you born then!?
ZhiKai:August 20th but I was born at 11:15pm so no way you were born after me!
QiaoPing:Nope! I'm younger,I was born at 11:45!
ZhiKai:We're so weird we know what time we were born.
QiaoPing:Eh!I'm asking you...you...uhh...
ZhiKai:What?
QiaoPing:Why doesnt YenYu seem to be I dont know...like you and Chen Qu.
ZhiKai:Oh...him...umm that's just how he is. He doesnt like being around girls cause he's GAY!!!
QiaoPing:Really!
ZhiKai:(laugh)no...YenYu has been hurt quite deeply once...so he doesnt like to be around people who will remind him of that girl.
QiaoPing:So its like that.
ZhiKai:But I'm quite amused, your younger sisters Ye Lin and Tian Ya are definetly the two girl I've seen that he actually wasted breathe to talk to.
QiaoPing:oh....eh ZhiKai Stop here!
...pulls over at the corner.....
...chen qu,tianya, and meijin drive by....
Tian Ya:eh?JieJie!!!
ChenQu:ZhiKai...You!
pulls over in front....
MeiJin:Ren Qiao Ping so you didnt wake up this morning so you could get a ride from ZhiKai!
QiaoPing:Eh? stop making assumptions!
ZhiKai:She didnt make the bus so I just gave her a lift...
ChenQu:oh...I thought you were...
Zhikai:shut it!
ChenQu:sorry eh?you girls gonna keep going with me or you'll walk the rest of the way.
MeiJin:no we'll walk the rest.
QiaoPing:ZhiKai Thanks...
TianYa:Ah!
ChenQu:something wrong?
TianYa;YeLin if you (points at qiaoping) didnt ride the bus then that means....
MeiJin:That means...YeLin Yen Yu and Tang Jun rode this morning together...
ZhiKai:This is gonna be fun!
ChenQu:Tell us how your sister feels later knowing those two there is no way they didnt offend her.
(on the bus earlier)
YenYu:the bus is here.
TangJun:seems crowded.
YeLin:it always is....
...tangjun, yen yu and ye lin gets on....
Tang Jun sit in one person seat.
YenYu sits in far back seat....rest of bus is full...
YeLin:(cursing)damn...I'm stuck with standing again.
YenYu:Do you want my seat.
TangJun:Eh Ye Lin I promise YenYu doesnt bite just sit with him.
YeLin:I...was just....
YenYu:looking for another seat, is fine you can sit on the outside.
Yelin walks over...bus stops eruptly....yelin trips!
YenYu:Eh!(catches her)
....YeLin is on top of YenYu....
Yelin:(to herself)oh no...this is bad...waaa...I never noticed but Senior Li's Eyes are so pretty...
YenYu:How long do you wanna stay there.
YeLin:sorry! I...didnt mean to...(blush)
YenYu:its okay.You can sit here Tang Jun's side is open I'll sit with him.
YeLin:oh...okay.Thanks.
YenYu goes to sit next to Tang Jun.
YeLin:(toherself)Ren YeLin your such a klutz!
(TangJun-n-YenYu's seat)
TangJun:Eh?Yen Yu dont you think that YeLin's kinda cute...?I think we just saw her only girl side.
YenYu:I dont know what you saw but I saw a pighead.
YeLin Sneezes...
Yenyu looks over...YeLin is rubbing her arms....
Yenyu:eh?TangJun you dont need your jacket right?
TangJun:oh...why?
YenYu:give it to the piggy over there she's freezing.
TangJun:huh...funny I was thinking about it too....
Tang Jun takes off his sweater and hands it to Ye Lin...
TangJun:you know girls are weaker than you think so they get cold...cold isnt good is it?
YeLin:your jacket...I...
TangJun:just take it.
YeLin:No thanks its just I'm under the a/c but it seems to have closed already... but thanks Senior Zhang.
TangJun:Eh?your in the Basketball association right?
YeLin:Yes,but I cant play as a girl so my name isnt on the roster.
TangJun:that seems unfair.
YeLin:Well maybe as the new president you should do something about it.
TangJun:OK!
TangJun looks over at YenYu who has just gotten back into his seat.
Yenyu:what are you looking at?
TangJun:Another nice thing you've done.
YenYu:I dont know what your talking about.
TangJun:Jin Cai Xue isnt Ren Ye Lin so please differate them.
YenYu:Zhang Tang Jun dont you dare compare the Two!
TangJun:cool down I'm just saying,Ye Lin and Cai Xue are too....wait a second YeLin and Cai Xue what is it you see in both!....no way you...
YenYu:I was taking care of her as a junior.
TangJun:Whatever.
.....school grounds....
(SchoolBell Rings)
---filming department----
TianYa:eh?didnt Chen Qu Senior say he is taking this course?
JianMi:Eh?Who are you daydreaming about now?
TianYa:Am not...just....
JianMi:Tell me later...the teachers here.
TEACHER:Attention everyone....class monitor.
TianYa:HERE!
TEACHER:We have a new student I'll have to trouble you to show around.
TianYa:Oh okay...
TEACHER:I'm pretty sure everyone has heard today our New Student has amazing looks...so I'll just hop to it....Let's Welcome Xue Chen Qu!
(Clapping and Whaa's)
TianYa:he wasnt kidding.
Jian Mi:Eh! Tian Ya Handsome one isnt he....your so lucky!
(clapping stops)
TEACHER:Please give an introduction of yourself to everyone.
ChenQu:Hello Everyone, My name is Xue Chen Qu.. if you've heard the Xue Banking Banks do belong to my family...and yes I do work at the Re Nao Cafe in Town...to wrap this up I wanna say I hope we can all become great friends in the future.Thanks.
TEACHER:Well, as do I....now lets see oh thats great go ahead and take a seat behind Tian Ya.
TianYa:Chen Qu Senior.
ChenQu:Nice to meet you....Class monitor....never would of expected it.
----music department----
Teacher giving lecture(about great arts)
*knock knock*
Teacher:Comein
(ZhiKai walks in)---QiaoPing looks....
QiaoPing:he really takes this course no way....
ChuMi(xiaomi):Who's he...so handsome!
QiaoPing:he uhh...works down past my house...
xiaomi:neighbor with such a hot guy!Liar you've hidden this for too long.
QiaoPing:XiaoMi stop talking nonsense.
ZhiKai is giving introduction about himself....
ZhiKai:and I wish that in the future I'll be able to work and cooperate with everyone in here...thanks.
Teacher:ZhiKai I've seen your records your quite a talented one and if anyone didnt know the Wang Industries is run by Zhikai's father...also
ZhiKai:I own my own shop not far away from school.
XiaoMi:you hit it big hes a hunk!!!
QiaoPing:I..didnt..xiao mi stop...
Teacher:Class Monitor would you please take the honor of taking zhi kai around the school.
QiaoPing:oh..okay I will...
Teacher:theres an empty seat next to QiaoPing go ahead and sit there.
ZhiKai walks over....
ZhiKai:(laughs)QiaoPing is class monitor...and so is Tian Ya so now I'm wondering about Mei Jin and Ye Lin.
QiaoPing:Relax and stop guessing...
----Culinary Department---
TEACHER:Everyone have a partner....eh? Class Monitor you dont right...will you be okay...
Ya Qing:Teacher when isnt MeiJin not okay with being alone....MeiJin your always no.1 so no one want to compete with you.
MeiJin:Ya Qing stop teasing will you...
Teacher:yes Ya Qing.
Ya Qing:Just kidding...MeiJin I love you!
MeiJing:I know sadly that you cant live without me.
YaQing:True True
(laughing)
*knock*
TangJun walks in...all girls gasp....YaQing looks at MeiJing
MeiJin:Zhang Tang Jun!...you...
TangJun:sorry teacher I'm a bit late, but first days of schools arent the easiest next time I'll be more punctual.
Teacher:very well spoken no problem we have just picked group...everyone attention this is Zhang Tang Jun, he has transferred here from ShangHai, I hope everyone will take care of him.
Everyone:okay.
Teacher:only our class monitor doesnt have a partner but you two should work fine together.
TangJun:You mean Mei Jin is the class monitor.
Teacher:you two know eachother then.
TangJun:I work down the road from her place.
Teacher:Well have a go at it.
TangJun:MeiJin I guess you'll have to put up with me this semester.
MeiJin:I'll show you around after class....
TangJun:Cool.
----Management class----
YenYu walks in...
All girls squek like little chipmunks!lol
YeLin looks up and looks back down.
YenYu:Reporting! Li Yen Yu, Teacher Chen correct.
TEACHER:Yes, Li Yen Yu a transfer regconized from HK....yes... well go ahead introduce yourself.
YenYu:Hello, I'm Li Yen Yu. I'm new here and will be taking this course.
QianQian:so handsome,he's that Li Industries Son!
YeLin:acting cool.
QianQian:eh?YeLin whats your problem.
Yelin:nothing wait I think your nose is crooked.
QianQian:What!(takes out mirror to check)
Teacher:Well I'll have our class monitor QianQian show you around.
YenYu:Reporting...Teacher is it possible that I have someone I'm closer to show me around.
Teacher:You said you just moved here.
YenYu:I met my neighbors yesterday.(looks straight at YeLin)
Teacher:Well I dont...
guys in room whisper:eh? he turned down Qian Qian....so gutless he doesnt want qian qian!
Teacher:Quiet...well go ahead I guess....
YenYu walks over to YeLin's desk (knocks on it 3x)
YeLin:Li Yen Yu I really would like it if...
YenYu:(whisper)dont show me around and I'll tell everyone about this morning.
YeLin:if...I could show you around.
QianQian:REN YE LIN have you lost your mind since when did you get that priviledge!
YeLin:Oh my goodness Qian Qian can you just SHUT UP!
YenYu:Sorry, but I just know YeLin so its easier for me...if...
QianQian(gentle):oh no no....its fine I was just wondering why you would choose YeLin instead of me...
YenYu:easy...I dont know you...
everyone laughs...teacher laughs...
QianQian:TEACHER!
Teacher:sorry sorry but he has a point....
-------class resumes....-----
-bell rings!-*_*
YenYu:Eh?YeLin I got a question?
YeLin:You know how to talk congrats and Yes I will seriously take you around the school.
YenYu:actually I was gonna ask if....
YeLin:if what...
QianQian:YeLin I've thought about it and we've never really said anything well nice to eachother...lets call it truce!
YenYu:Are you interested in a date with me, Qian Qian rite?
YeLin:Wow your taste is horrible!
(everyone laughs)
QianQian:me?...I...
YenYu:joking...gotcha...
YeLin:you tell amazing jokes.Come on lets go.
She heads out first.
YenYu:Sorry but I like a girl that can prove herself.(smiles and leaves)
---TianYa is showing Chen Qu around...but its taking forever with the crowd of girls----
TianYa:Senior Chen Qu could you please stop signing signatures and taking pictures so that I could finish up and go to work.
ChenQu:Aiyo...its just a few pictures,dont worry....you wont be late!
TianYa:ChenQu You!
JianMi:Hey Tian Ya...hes so handsome...its fine...
TianYa:Eh?Jian Mi you help me show him around so I wont be late for work.
JianMi:OKAY!
JianMi Runs to Chen Qu...Tian Ya runs to work...
ChenQu:Oh...uhh...Jian Mi rite?
JianMi:Yes...oh TianYa is gonna be late for work so I decided that I would show you around the grounds!
ChenQu:oh...what will happen if she is late?
JianMi:mmm depends either Ye Lin yells at her or Mei Jin cuts her salary and TianYa is late alot so Mei Jin isnt very hard on it but Ye Lin is...
ChenQu:She wont make it!...I'll have to go explain Ye Lin...Thanks JianMi but actually I already know where everything is.
Chenqu runs off.
---the shop---
Tian Ya is talking to an elder man with an apron on.
ChenQu:TianYa there's where you are I was wondering where you went!
Uncle:oh...TianYa who is this?
ChenQu:OH you must be TianYa's dad Mr.Ren Chuan Ji! Hello my name is Xue ChenQu! I'm Tian Ya's Senior I was the reason...
Uncle:whao whao whao slow down there young one....(laughs)Tian Ya you and your older sister QiaoPing must of hit a jackpot!
ChenQu:Mr. Ren I...
Uncle:Listen now you! 1st my name is Ren Zhou Dong not Chuan Ji which means my older brother is definetly not me. 2nd Tian Ya and QiaoPing are actually the first two here today and 3rd Xue Chen Qu Let me make this clear our Tian Ya is our precious baby so dont you dare hurt her....
TianYa:Uncle! We're not!
ChenQu:yes...wait uncle?
ZhiKai:Loser!(laughs)yea this is TianYa and QiaoPing's Uncle. Mr.Zhou Dong. didnt you listen just now.
ChenQu:How are you here?shouldnt you already be at the shop!
ZhiKai:Hello do do bird I'm here to pick up something only jeez.
QiaoPing:plus he was like you afraid that I was gonna get yelled at for being late, no one figured that PaPa isnt home this week and YeLin has clubs afterschool, plus who knows where meiJin is?
MeiJin:Right here, I had to show TangJun where his classes were....
ChenQu:Wait so MeiJin your the one who showed Tang Jun around...and Tian Ya showed me around...so Qiaoping showed you around.
points to ZhiKai...
ZhiKai:which means is it possible that YeLin showed YenYu around!
QiaoPing:no, Ye Lin isnt the class monitor in her classroom, so its impossible.
ZhiKai:who is the class monitor in his class then...
TianYa:its Yan Qian Qian! I cant stand her...
ZhiKai:that name sounds so familiar...
ChenQu:uhh your dad tried to set you on a date with her but you declined then YenYu's dad took it up but he fled to HongKong....(laugh) you two are pahetic.
TianYa;I would've left too, I dont like her
ChenQu:too bad that wasnt the reason he left.
ZhiKai:yea he is more useless than me.
MeiJin:oh TangJun wanted me to tell you YenYu is still at school so he needs you two to get to work.
ZhiKai:Work Work Work!Lets go mr.playboy!
ChenQu:your the one to talk
(talking nonsense while leaving-say goodbyes)
Uncle:they are quite cute actually well so whose datin who?
QiaoPing:uncle we're gonna be here a while okay.( goes get busy)
TianYa:I think Senior is into girls like QiaoPing very elegant so byes( runs to kitchen)
uncle looks at meijin
MeiJin:dont look at me...(she walks up stairs)
Uncle:What the heck you guys bring home obviously good looking guys with good requirements and you dont even consider them! I dont get you girls!
TianYa:(yells)stop trying!
----Chapt.3:Judo Accident!----
Coach Blows Whistle: okay gather up now! I have an announcement to make today as you all know I have already looked over reports and status and our Club president and Vice-President have already been chosen! Li Yen Yu is our new Club President this is also his first year here so guidelines are not to be pushed! understood!
everyone:Understood
girls mummering so handsome...
yelin:dependent on looks...I dont expect I cant beat you....(looks at Yen Yu with a death glare)
guys in room....mummer its back yelin's eyes of death...girls shut up....
Coach:okay now our Vice-Pres. Ren Ye Lin! step out now...now all you guys I'm sure are very familiar with her and as you know Ye Lin isnt easy to push around.
YeLin:Your exaggerating Coach but Its pretty accurate...(looks at everyone)
YenYu:oh...then how am supposed to have you assist me in understanding everyone.
YeLin:President your job is to watch everyones moves and make sure no one gets out of line understood.
YenYu:doesnt that include you.
Coach:cool down now you two...no match here...
YeLin:actually that sounds great...Li Yen Yu if you lose I get your office,okay?
YenYu:oh...is that so, then I guess there is no turning back..
Coach:uhh...
everyone:PK Pk Pk Pk! duel!
Coach:okay Li Yen Yu , Ren Ye Lin you two remember its a fair match.
YeLin:dont hold back because I promise I wont.
YenYu:Oh is that rite, okay let's see exactly how good you are....
(start-whistle blows)
yenyu:eh?YeLin you really want that spot dont you...(he tries to flip her.)
YeLin:nice one but you gotta be quicker, this is for this morning!(flip...fail..)
YenYu:one more of those and I'll have you pinned down for sure....
YenYu trips YeLin and falls on top.....!KISS!
Everyone is room is quiet!
YeLin gets up wipes lips and is staring around room, YenYu gets ups.
YenYu:sorry, I....aiyo it was an accident right Coach....
YeLin:You can be President I lost....(yelin runs for changing room)
Coach:it was just a simple kiss but will YeLin be okay?
YenYu:I dont know I apologize again later.
(2 other members come up to him)
JiChen:Eh?Yen Yu did you know Ye Lin hasnt kissed a guy before your the first one, eh how does it feel to be a first....talk a little will you...
GuoHe:Yea...seriously though have you seen her when she was swimming! damn I wish she would date someone...if
JiChen:if you this perv. had a chance she would be so unlucky....
GuoHe:got that right...mmhmm...(laughing together)
YenYu:Have you two had enough fun! go back to practice!
walks off.
GuoHe:the hecks his problem
JiChen:Whatever lets go...
Coach:Eh, YenYu you best call it a day and check on Ye Lin you guys are neighbors right?
YenYu:okay.
(changing room)
YeLin:Damn Yen Yu that was my first kiss.....(washing face)...no it didnt count...it didnt....
YenYu:(yells in)Hey Ye Lin Are You Ready!...uhhh I'm waiting out here!
YeLin:(gasp)what!?! this guy is such a dumbass....okay YeLin jai you it was nothing...
she heads out...to see yen yu leaning against pillar...<3
YenYu:just now...sorry it was an accident.
YeLin:Aiyo, dont say it like that anyway....its not like its the first kiss right(laugh)
YenYu:(confused)but the judo guys said it was.
YeLin:dont listen to them spout nonsense, anyways I gotta go...
she starts walking...yen yu follows.
Yelin:Why are you following me!
YenYu:we live down the same road.
Yelin:right...uhh..then...together then, I feel wierd w/ppl behind me.
YenYu:oh..
YeLin:You know my sister TianYa right?
YenYu:oh yea...the little one right.
YeLin:yeah...she is quite fond of you guys...
YenYu:oh...a lot of girls are...
YeLin:eh wat does....(step in front of him)
*bump* almost falls backward, he catches her....
YenYu:jeez you are a klutz.
Yelin:am not...uhh....are you gonna let go...
pulls her closer....
YenYu:why are you shaking...
YeLin breaks free:I hate it when people hold me...
YenYu:oh....Lets go I'll race you to the bus stop.
YeLin:okay.
(race)
---Re Nao Cafe---
ZhiKai:Hello ladies how many?
firstlady:3 thank you.
ZhiKai:right this way please...
ChenQu:oh wat do we have here? any sweets for a beauty like yourself...
(busy day everyone is working...)
Ye Quan:Eh?TangJun where the heck is YenYu he's supposed to be here.
TangJun:I dont know....(busy cooking)
*bell rings* Yen Yu walks in
ZhiKai:Welcome! oh lazy hurry up...ohhh....
YeLin walks in....
YeLin:wats with the oh...he lost the race he owes me a drink.
ZhiKai:really...oh well have a seat.
ChenQu:what do we have here a natural blossom.
YeLin:save the sweet talk senior...I sit in the corner....
YenYu grabs her arm.
YeLin:what....
YenYu:over here sit at the stool it'll be more convient.
YeLin:oh...well get busy you guys.
Zhikai:Eh?ChenQu did he just....
ChenQu:physical contact with a girl...
YeQuan:you two make it sound like so perverted...YeLin a nice girl leave it....
walks over to YeLin.
YeLin:Quan Ge. How have you been.
YeQuan:havent seen you smile for so long.
YeLin:I've only seen you twice since I came back.
YeQuan:so what brings you here little girl!(rubs her head)
YeLin:YeQuan Ge stop calling me that...eh, its your YenYu he lost to me in a race so I told him to treat me to something...
YeQuan:okay well have fun I'm gonna work.
YeLin:okay.
(YenYu sets the smoothie down.)
YenYu:havent seen you so open before.
YeLin:then you must be very blind...its only for QuanGe.
YenYu:Quan Ge...you call it so easily...you like him?
YeLin:whats it to you!
YenYu:doesnt matter.
Yelin:yep I like him...plus its been 5years...I know he has a girlfriend but I dont believe that I'm worth nothing to him.
YenYu:oh good be confident...
*text for yelin*
~yelin where are you? tianya!~
*text reply*
~ReNao Cafe, getting a drink its free so...~
-Ren Xin Cafe-
TianYa:AHHHH!
QiaoPing/MeiJin:Whats Wrong!
TianYa:YeLin is at Re Nao Cafe!
QiaoPing/MeiJin/Uncle:WHAT!
----Chapt.4:Daddy Welcome Home----
-ReNao Cafe-
zhikai:Welcome!oh wat now...all three sisters are here.
chenqu:wow yenyu is amazing...
Yequan:oh...xiao tian ya...qiaoping, meijin all you guys are here.
QiaoPing:long time no see where is my sister.
yequan:she's looking at my new guitar collection upstairs why?
tianya;wait so she came to see that not...yen..
yenyu:did you expect her to come here becasue of me....I lost a race so she took the chance to come see quan.
tianya:yen yu, are you okay...what do you mean lost a race.
chenqu:YenYu keep his promises....they race to the bus stop and he lost so he got her a drink....
Yelin walks down stairs....
YeLin:ye quan ge its amazing...oh! TianYa, QiaoPing, MeiJin what are you guys doing here....
MeiJin:same here.
QiaoPing:Let's go Ye Lin we're late for work.
*beep beep text message* all 4 pull out phones....
--daddy is home!---
meijin/qiaoping:Pa is home!
TianYa:Aiyo!
YeLin:finally he's home....
ZhiKai:they're reactions are all different.
ChenQu:I know.
TangJun:Oh MeiJin I had a question for tomorrow... the project we're doing...
MeiJin:its in the folder...oh tell the teacher I'm taking a leave tomorrow...
(all 4 run out)
TangJun:oh...
ChenQu:dads home why take a leave.
YeQuan:that story I'll you tell after work as for right now...go to work!
(Ren Xin Cafe!)
Uncle:Hurry Ye Lin get your apron on...QiaoPing hair up up!..MeiJin the tickets...no the cupons....
TianYa:Uncle calm down...I'll do it.
(door bell rings)...Mr.Ren Chuan Ji walks in...
TianYa:Papa!
Runs up and hugs her dad.
Mr.Ren:Oh my little angel how have you been, look at you have you gotten taller...
MeiJin:Dad, she hasnt its called high heels...you've been gone so long.*hug*
QiaoPing:Daddy.I missed you too!*hug*
Uncle:Um, well Chuan Ji I guess you have a raised a great bunch of Girls they have kept your business here going well...
ChuanJi:I know...but why does it seem less crowded than last year?
Uncle:Nothing really just...
Tianya:Daddy Theres a New Shop down the street, and also their employees are so handsome...
Mr.Ren:Better looking than our QiaoPing...as good at making sweets as my little angel too?
TianYa:daddy they really are so handsome.OH! and they go to our school.
YeLin:TianYa you had better shush this moment before I make you.
Mr.Ren:of course the only one didnt come hug me like a girl.
YeLin:Welcome home dad.(holds out hand)
Mr.Ren:(shakes his daughters hand)Well it seems I didnt make the wrong choice in putting you into the management class.
MeiJin:dont worry daddy no one knows that our cafe is related to Mom's company.
Uncle:girls bring the luggage in and let your dad rest. Mei Jin go whip up something its already 6pm! Time Flys!
Mr.Ren:Zhuo Dong do you wanna call it a day.
Uncle:can i?
Mr.Ren:I'm back and I'll transfer the money to your account, I'll see you in a month.
Tianya:daddy going to stay a month! Yeah! I'm gonna make you a cake.
QiaoPing:Tomorrow you make one.(sets down one of the dishes)
TianYa;Why?oh! yea daddy's birthday!
YeLin:Dad, may I ask a question?
Mr.Ren:Yes why not.
YeLin:one month,Why?
QiaoPing:YeLin dont be disrepectful!
YeLin:I'm not, its just ever since mom died he's never been home longer than 2 weeks so I was asking.
Mr.Ren:Well...my birthday is tomorrow and I told the directors at the company I was taking a months leave.
YeLin:Why this month.
TianYa:Silly his birthday is this month.
YeLin:okay if you dont want to answer its fine...heres your oolong tea just the way you like it.(she head back to her corner)
Mr.Ren:QiaoPing sit down for a second.
(he starts to eat the noodles MeiJin made)
QiaoPing:pa, is something wrong.
Mr.Ren:YeLin how has she been lately...your the oldest?
QiaoPing:Pretty well...her reports are outstanding in school, umm in Judo she fine to the Vice-Pres. and on the basketball team she is also good, swimming team she is fine the coach actually wanted to send her to Europe.
Mr.Ren:What exactly is her schedule.
QiaoPing:Everyday after school its Judo,umm sometimes she goes to basketball practice but the coach didnt make it required for her since she is a girl, and swimming is on weekends. Then she works here.Oh! she did work at the orphange over the summer.
Mr.Ren:Friends?Still only guys...
QiaoPing:I dont think she has any female friends....no boyfriends either.
MeiJin:But dad why are you asking so much about YeLin?
Mr.Ren:Well I asked the company and they said that out of you four Ye Lin may be the best choice for a successor.
QiaoPing:but dad I thought I was....I'm the oldest.
Mr.Ren:Honey do you remember you told me you didnt want it.
MeiJin:true, but wat about me I'm next and my scores are best?
Mr.Ren:true but your taking culinary courses....management is needed.
MeiJin:True and I wouldnt want to change that.
QiaoPing:And I dont like the idea of being the sucessor either.
Mr.Ren:then YeLin it will be...as soon as she is married.
Qiaoping:good luck with that.
YeLin:I dont want to go on blind dates.! I dont wanna!
Mr.Ren:darling listen its critial...and your mom would have wanted the same.
YeLin:okay...for mom...for us...but if after the 10th one its unsucessful I refuse okay.
Mr.Ren:okay.
TianYa:Hey wat is everyone talking about look daddy Strawberry drizzled cake!
Mr.Ren:set it down sweetheart....(eating...)
Yelin goes upstairs......
--after shop closes--in Yelin and TianYa's room.
TianYa:Hey yelin are you asleep.
YeLin:no why.
Tianya:I was wondering...how well do you understand Yenyu.
YeLin:enough...
TianYa:Really!
(jumps over to her bed)
TianYa:get up get up!
YeLin:what....
TianYa:what if I said I liked him.
YeLin:then I would say choose again.
Tianya:why? is it because you guys have something!
YeLin:Ren Tian ya! you have better not talk nonsense or I promise I'll switch rooms with QiaoPing.
TianYa:no I cant stand the way her perfume smells....okay okay...
YeLin:go to sleep.
(MeiJin and QiaoPing's room)
MeiJin:10dates....QiaoPing....is it exaggerated or what.
QiaoPing:not...dad had it prepared for her earlier.
MeiJin:he did!
QiaoPing:From the day mom diedm because YeLin had enough courage to leave the room he chose her....
(YeLin'TianYa room)
Yelin gets up and walks outside to backyard....thinks of night her mother passed away....
*happy birthday to you song*
Mom:oh my dear YeLin did you make it especially for me!
(holding a cup made by YeLin)
YeLin:mommy its so even when your sitting in your wheel chair you can have the same feeling when you were standing...
Mom:that is my sweetheart.
Dad:oh here we are now!TianYa go.
Tianya singing:twinkle twikle little star!(pulls out a jar full of origami stars)
Mom:thats my little angel....
QiaoPing:MaMa this is for you to....sets down a box full of strawberries.
Mom:sweetheart...(kiss)
MeiJin:Mommy look I made it!(set down a plate of cookies)
Dad:they look delicious.
Mom:yes they do...
YeLin:Oh...daddy we have no candles for mommy to blow out.
Mom:Yes we do.
YeLin:No we dont...I'll go buy some across the street.
she runs off...
Dad:that girl.
he plays with other 3 girls.
Mom worried followed....
YeLin:Mama I'll be back soon.
she runs across street dropped money half way.
YeLin:oh!(runs back)
*BEEP BEEP*car is headed for yelin.
Mom:Baby move....
YeLin:mama!
Her mom jumps out of chair and push her....
(CRASH!)
Yelin:MAMA!!!
---Chapt.4:For you my mother---
Yelin:Mama!
Mr.Ren and his daughter look....
Mr.Ren(yells):Mo Li!
QiaoPing:MaMa!
YeLin;Mama....(crawls over to her mom)
TianYa;MeiJin why isnt momma moving....
MeiJin hugs TianYa....*crying*
-Hospital..-
Nurse:okay you guys may only go this far....
_ER_
doctor comes out....
Mr.Ren:how is my wife!
D:not great I'm afraid...with her last stroke and being paralyzed I'm afraid she will not live past tonight,cherish the time....(looks at girls and sighs)
YeLin:Liar!MaMa will be fine! she will!(runs in)mama!
Mr.Ren:Yelin be good(picks up his daughter)
D:we'll transfer her to a visitation room....
_visitationroom_
Mom:ChuanJi....I know my time is limited...but I still want to say it one more time...I love you....I love our daughters....each one of you dont forget why you are who you are....
QiaoPing:(crying)Mommy!
Mom:QiaoPing your are Concidence that allowed your father and me to stay together,you are what gave us justice....
Meijin:mommy me?
Mom:My MeiJin....you stand for the beautiful golden ring your father bought me even though that was all the money on him.
Tianya:mommy....mommy....
Mom:TianYa...so sorry I named you after that one sweet tooth your father always had when we were young....you are our joy....
Mr.Ren:Stop it...dont....your not leaving....
Mom:no! shh....yelin come over...
Yelin slowly walks over with a blank face....
Mom:let mom see your smile....
Yelin smiles...
Mom:that is my strong girl...keep your head held high dont look down...ever never let anyone look down on you!
YeLin:yes ma'am.
Mom:you were named after the forest I planted your father and my wish....it was called lao ye de jin lin-(golden forest of old gods)....(she closes her eyes)
*BEEEEEPPP*
Mr.Ren:MoLi...MOLi!!!
QiaoPing/MeiJin/Tianya:mama! mama!
YeLin:have a safe trip mom.(yelin runs out of room)
*flash back done*
YeLin:(a tear drops)Ma....can you see me...I havent put my head down...never.
(looking at stars)
Dad comes out....
*sigh*
Yelin:(wipes eyes)Dad.
Dad:dont hold it in tell me...like you did she was here...
YeLin:I really miss her...dad...I miss her....its all my fault, If I had just stayed where I was nothing would of happened.
dad:Yelin my little sweetheart...it was not your fault...
YeLin:You say that b/c you blame yourself....Dad....that is why you will not get married right...or...
dad:no one can replace your mother...
YeLin:thank you daddy....
Dad:Tomorrow we go visit your mothers grave.
YeLin:okay....
(Next Morning...)
Tian Ya;its been a year since I've seen mommy.
QiaoPing:hush YeLin is coming down...
MeiJin:what's with the sunglasses.
Yelin:it sunny outside.
MeiJin:its raining...
Dad:no more bickering in the car now...faster...
(outside)---YenYu is standing on opposite side of street with unbrella.
QiaoPing:oh...YeLin your Judo President is looking for you.
YenYu nods his head at their dad.
Dad nods back.
Dad:go on hurry.
Tianya:i....
dad:you little angel are going to hurry up too, come on now meijin! YeLin well wait for you at the curb okay.
YeLin:oh okay.
runs over to yen yu...
_beep beep_ Yen Yu sees the car....
YeLin freezes flashbacks....
YeLin:ma....
YenYu pulls her to him....(sunglasses fall)
driver swears:cant see ppl are driver...
Yelin*hug*:ma....dont go....ma.....YenYu pats her head....
YeLin:sorry...but just one more second...
Yenyu:oh...no problem.
*one tear drops*
Yelin:okay...sorry...(pulls away)
YenYu pulls her back.(hard hug)
YeLin:what are you doing....it hurts....
YenYu:I know....cry a girl should at least cry from pain...
YeLin:I dont cry from pain....
YenYu:do you cry from fear.?
YeLin:I dont know...sicko get off...
YenYu pushes her against wall pins her to the wall.....he looks her in the eyes....
YenYu:do you or do you not cry from fear?
YeLin:no....
YenYu moves all the way in to almost touch her lips....
YeLin a tear drops...
YenYu:Yes, is your answer. here stand behind me, no one will see you crying...(picks up umbrella from ground).
YeLin cries...
YenYu:as a girl you really shouldnt push yourself it isnt good you know...
(turns around she's gone)
Yelin is walking down to the curb....
*text message for YenYu*
-I got your number from the school manual. dont freak...xie xie ni... speak of this and I'll kill you...-
RenYeLin
YenYu smiles:oh then for my sake I'll be quiet
YeLin-looks back...
YenYu:Dang I forget to tell her that one dude thinks she has an amazing body.
Zhikai:What you think YeLin has an amazing body!!!
YenYu:Ahh!Where did you come from....
(car)
MeiJin:what's taking her so long....
Tianya:she's right there,and soaking wet.
Mr.Ren:YeLin are you okay where is your umbrella?...
YeLin:I'm Fine Dad....My umbrella...
QiaoPing:Is with Li Yen Yu...(nods outside)
*knock knock*
Mr.Ren:(rolls down his window)Yes?
YenYu:Mr.Ren correct.
Mr.Ren:Yes,..and you?
YenYu:my apologies, Li Yen Yu. Li Industries 2nd son.
Mr.Ren:May I help You.
YenYu:Well before I pour rain into your van, this umbrella belongs to your daughter, we're classmates, should I help her fill in a leave.
Mr.Ren:You may Sir.(takes umbrella and hands it to qiao ping who throws it to TianYa)
YenYu:Have a good day then.(nods and walks toward bus stop)
Mr.Ren:I haven't met a lad that can speak that well in well since me!*laughs*
QiaoPing:Daddy I think that is the lamest joke you have ever told.
TianYa:daddy cant tell jokes!(laughing)
YeLin:Dad,Lets go...Mommys waiting....
MeiJin:oh..YeLin.
YeLin:I'm fine.(looks out at window in direction YenYu walked off)
Dad:okay girls lets go!
(bus stop)
ZhiKai:eh!Li YenYu can you stop avoiding my question by answering with questions!
YenYu:maybe I dont wanna answer.
ZhiKai:I only said which perv. keeps checking out our innocent YeLin! and who was the bastard that kissed YeLin yesterday.
YenYu:how do you know about that!
ZhiKai:easy its like...
ChenQu:All over the skool, RenYeLin lost it accidently huh? damn why didnt I figure she was the pure one!
TangJun:with all her good friends you'd be in peices in no time!*laughs*
YenYu:so you guys dont know who it was?
TangJun:heard everyones too scared to say it, YeLin evidently has a good amount of admirers on the blacklist...whoo hate to be the one to spill it.
ZhiKai:But if Yen Yu says it no one can do anything...so who was it!
Chenqu:*beepbeep* txt mssg:
chenqu,It was YenYu
-mocha-
He looks at YenYu.
YenYu:what?
ChenQu:come here.
YenYu:was not!
ChenQu:oh okay then forget it...for now.
(bus arrives)
----mountain top---
Dad:Girls we're finally here look all the calalillies, butterflies and the sea!!!
TianYa:I still dont see why we dont just move here.
MeiJin:Oh because according to statistics this area is
QiaoPing:Stop before beautiful turns ugly
MeiJin:sorry....eh?wheres Yelin.
QiaoPing:where else the lighthouse of course, its her area.
Dad:well then Lets head to Mo Li's grave first.
(all go to mom's grave except YeLin)
YeLin:(Looking out toward sky)Ma...do you see me,I've grown up. I've kept my head tall...but Ma...can you please explain to me one thing....(drops a tear) why did you leave...
*ringring*
Yelin:*sniff*sniff* Hello.
ZhiKai:Are you crying...?
Yelin:oh no I'm fine, Is something wrong?
ZhiKai:Well,..I'm suppose to get your sister an absent pass but what do I tell the teacher? I cant lie.
YeLin:Never thought you guys arent good at messing with teachers.
ZhiKai:eh?not everyone is like ChenQu okay. now seriously.
YeLin:Tell her its my mothers death anniversary then.
ZhiKai:Its what.
(beep)
YeLin:Yelin dont shed anymore tears...Jai You....
Dad:YeLin lets go.
YeLin:okay.
(Mom's Burial...)
QiaoPing:Mommy look doesnt MeiJin resemble you...her cooking is almost as good as yours now.
TianYa;Mommy Look dont I look like I've grown up!(laugh)if you see me you would definetly be proud.
MeiJin:Mommy QiaoPing takes care of us just fine, I help her as much as I can...If you were here though maybe YeLin would be a little different.
(walking up)
YeLin:dont talk behind my back.
MeiJin:sorry.
Dad:Mo Li do you see...you left me 4 beautiful girls...each one is an angel.
YeLin:Ma...Thanks for helping us make the shop so welcomed...your portrait still hangs in the cafe....
Tianya:Mommy everyone always says who is this lady she's so beautiful, and I always say its you!
YeLin:Ma...
QiaoPing:YeLin Let's go first let dad stay a bit later.
MeiJin:Yea...come on Tian Ya.
TianYa:Daddy come later okay.
(girls head down the hill)
QiaoPing:(stretches arms)Well I can only say now is that we need to relax more.
YeLin:I'm agreeing this time...today has been too moody.
TianYa:(Jumps in front)This morning! You and YenYu What Happened!
QiaoPing:Yeah are you guys together?!
MeiJin:or is it more complicated.
YeLin:Haow! I knew it no wonder all the way here you guys were whispering...nothing happened...
TianYa:Liar.
YeLin:really though...I almost got hit by a car he just pulled me out of the way. (walks off)
QiaoPing:That's it....so why does she seem so shy about.
MeiJin:Every year mom's anniversary we meet with something unexpected.
TianYa:Yeah! Last year I found a duck in my bed!
QiaoPing:Oh please we all know that Me and MeiJin stuck....ahh...(laugh)
...meijin and qiaoping run after yelin...
Tianya:you two....what kind of sisters are you! stand there now!(chases)
Yelin:hey you guys come over here!
(Secret Base)
MeiJin:its our secret base
QiaoPing:cool this old cave still exist.
Tianya:I thought your IQ was pretty high.
QiaoPing:what does that mean?
TianYa:its a cave how will it disappear...
MeiJin:true...look our treasure box....awe...TianYa's hair clip!
TianYa:oh...look little chocolate.
QiaoPing:my teddy!Little chocolate come here!
YeLin:look a picture of us and mom!
Dad:(yells)Girls Where Are You!
YeLin:Aiya...We'll skip school and come again but as for now, dad.
(hill top parking area)
Dad:there you are,quickly we'll go get some snacks.
Tianya:Daddy can we stop at that stall down the hill...
MeiJin:oh yeah the one that sells the mango ice!
YeLin:Its been a while huh?
Dad:It has...your mom seems a bit down today.
YeLin:Its beacause you dont visit enough.(smile)Dad I'm joking its tears of joy....
(basketball court @ school)
TangJun:Okay first off I know everyone wants to join but first you must pass all test with at least a 90% average...got it!
student:what kind of test...
TangJun:of course it will be athletic test.
student:no way come on everyone has taken a physics...
student2:yea really come on..hey coach?
coach:makes sense could raise our chances of getting a championship.
zhikai pops up behind the coach..
zhikai:and you may win the attention of mrs.Lin in the music department...
coach:oh and i...(coughs)no such nonsense its all you tang jun go ahead.
TangJun:We have two ways to do this one you guys play me and another team or 2 I take you guys up mountain and do a endurance check?
student:pssht..hey we got into the top 5 last year without TangJun what are we scared of...
student3:yea...PK
students:Pk Pk PK Pk Pk!
a crowd gathers full of girls and guys...
student2:hey isnt ye lin gonna try out again this year?
student3:not likely she will be able to...I heard her daddys home.
TangJun:Quiet...let me introduce my team...my high school companions you can say....Wang Zhi Kai 181cm, 69Kg...
WangZhiKai:oh man I thought you said it wouldnt be a waste of time...
student:eh?isnt he from the swimming club...
student3:yah..and the music department too...loser.
WangZhiKai:CATCH!(throws ball with unbelivable strength)
Student:ooff.(falls)
WangZhiKai:sissy.
(girls cheering guys booing and yelling)
TangJun:Xue Chen Qu 183cm,65kg.
student:waah...so tall...
student4:so what short has benifits too...plus he's so tiny...nothing to worry...
Xue ChenQu takes off jacket (girls scream) shows off amazing chest muscles...
student4:I lied..
ChenQu:Hello little friend.(looking down)
student4:heell..ooo(pass out)
TangJun:ChenQu and ZhiKai get back over here.
YenYu:those two dimwits dont even think they look stupid like that...
(girls in an uproar...)
student:no way a book worm...really and its summer come on whats with the sweater sissy!
YenYu:*looks..smiles* if i'm a sissy with my IQ then that makes you a no one right.
student:shut up and bring it brainiac!
YenYu:oh.
YenYu takes off his jacket, girls scream....
ZhiKai:hey Yen Yu you wanna warm up...
YenYu:oh.
dribble....3point.
YenYu:oh that felt nice.
student:no way that was...warming up.
YenYu:you dont expect a simple shot one do you?
YeLin:You 4 can really be a pain the butt you know that!
student:yes, YeLin!
YeLin:wat was that?
student:uh...Student Ren.
YeLin:better...I wanna play...
Quan:Hey guys sorry I'm late but YeLin needed a ride.
YenYu:I thought you were ....
YeLin:what...thanks for this morning but I still think these guys have worked pretty hard over the summer to play...
YenYu:oh.TangJun you hear that.
TangJun:yea...so I'll...
YeLin:TangJun....Keep at least 5 of them...just five out of the ten.
TangJun:you heard her 5 players will make it.
YeLin:I want to join that makes it four already.
Zhikai:oh what makes you so confident...
YeLin:the fact that you 4 are short a member.
Quan:they arent...I'm playing too...
YeLin:What!
(End of Chapt.4)...
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